Comma Splices and Run-Ons(Tutoring Sessions 1)

 


How can we fix these sentence?
identify whether each is a Comma Splice (CS), Run-on (RO), or correct (C).

In today's class ,Ms.Loisa give us a wonderful lesson on how to fix the sentences. CS,RO,and C,I 
learned a lot and did some exercese, I realize this is a small part I never paid attention to before, but it is so immportant in English  .

It really helped me  more clearly understand the using of comma,actually ,even a small punctuation mistakes can change the meaning or clarity of a sentence. For example, I used to put together two independent clauses with a comma, I don't konw that it’s a comma splice. Now, I know that I should use a period, a semicolon, or a coordinating conjunction like “and” or “but.”

I also practiced identifying run-on sentences, which are long and confusing because they aren’t separated properly. These grammar points may seem minor, but they are very important for writing clearly. I will keep practicing so I can improve my sentence structure and write more accurately in English.


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