Evidence of Paper Rewrite Reflection (Wrapper)

    In paper3, according to my teacher's feedback, I improved the quotition, the agument thesis and structure of my paragraphs,clarified my statment and added some stronger evidence to supoort my mian argument. In passage 3, teacher adviced me to add some thing of southen CA as example, she also offer some material as quotition source,it is very properly for my argument and very helpful.

    She alao give me a lot of advice and teach me to correct the erroes of format.I correct a lot of little mistakes I had been making for many years. I corrected formatting issues like leaving two spaces between paragraphs and adding spaces after commas. These seem small, but they made my paper look much more professional.

    Based on the feedback I received, I made significant changes to my thesis and supporting evidence. I also corrected small but recurring issues, such as spacing after commas and paragraph formatting. Through this process, I gained a deeper understanding of how to strengthen my writing and feel more confident about the final version.





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