Erin Han AMLA80

      I really want to say something more about the class after finishing all the portfolio.actually, this is my first credit course, And I am truly grateful for being here and meeting all of you—our kind teacher Ms. Lee, tutor Loisa, and all the classmates we grow together .Like many middle-aged students, we came with our own stories, but we made it through together.      I especially want to thank Ms. Lee, and your teaching style is so perfessional and effective. Your class is full of  kindness ,warmth and sincerity. I always remember you correct my pronunciation word by word ,typing them in chat, you never got tired of pointing out my basic mistakes in the paper, you encourage me  reading my first English book,  DBU .  you always keep a wonderful smile on your pretty face, all of the moment is the motivation that makes me going forward. That was exactly the reason why AMLA80  is a special experience to me.    ...

  I recently completed a Writing Center Directed Learning Activity (DLA) focused on the final project, through this DLA, I learned how to answer the queston, how to make the final project well, the tutor was nice and supportive,and the tutor help me review my paper 2 and paper 3 draft, the tutor showed me how to improve my thesis statement and how to make the format better, I also received helpful advice           on how to orgnize and clear my ideas in my paper.this is really an amazing experience for my ,it make me feel maor confident in my learning, and let me konw how to use the writing center as a valuable learning resounce in the future. 

    I attended the Writing Center workshop. This was my first time trying this learning resource, and I found it very useful. I learned that I can get class assistance for any of my courses. I studied four types of sentences: simple sentences, compound sentences, complex sentences, and compound-complex sentences. I also learned how to analyze sentence structure and how to correct them. I discovered that there are many different workshops for various topics, and they are very helpful. The teachers there are also very kind and supportive.

       I have ever attended Loisa's class 5-6 times. evry time she prepared different topic for us, and focus on the difficult and complex aspect and konwledge in writing class, she help me alot for my writing class and paper.  about final project                                                                about final final reflect question

     During the AMLA study, I can always get the help from teachers. I ever been to Esther Lee's office hours for help.at that time I had a lot of problems and confusions in paper writing and portfolio creating, so I come to her and ask for help, she is very nice and patient to me, she helped me soving all the problems borther me for a long time.      I solved all the problems I faced while  writing papper 3, I was able to clear up  some confusion  and I learned how to search for class and make an appointment through the workshop list, and get the class that really helpful for me.      Ms.Lee help me a lot, not only in teaching me detailed knowledge,but also by introducing me a lot of  useful  learning resources. how to use liabery and read more books ,and how to attend workshop, and get helpul classes, and how to get help from Loisa and so on .

     In paper3, according to my teacher's feedback, I improved the quotition, the agument thesis and structure of my paragraphs,clarified my statment and added some stronger evidence to supoort my mian argument. In passage 3, teacher adviced me to add some thing of southen CA as example, she also offer some material as quotition source,it is very properly for my argument and very helpful.      She alao give me a lot of advice and teach me to correct the erroes of format.I correct a lot of little mistakes I had been making for many years. I corrected formatting issues like leaving two spaces between paragraphs and adding spaces after commas. These seem small, but they made my paper look much more professional.      Based on the feedback I received, I made significant changes to my thesis and supporting evidence. I also corrected small but recurring issues, such as spacing after commas and paragraph formatting. Through this process, I gained a ...

     In my paper 3, I really felt the progress I've make in my writing class. from using the format properly to      applying quoation correctly,and from creating a clear agument thesis to providing a strong supporting evidenc, I have improved a lot compared to my earlier papers, I also found it easier to apply writing techniques in both the introduction and the conclusion ,which really supresed and encouraged me .      With the help from teacher Lee, I have corrcted some litle mistakes that I had been making for many many years. like adding a space after a comma not placeing a space before it .My teacher patiently pointed it out again and again until I finally fixed it. I also used to forget to leave two line tetween to paragrapghs ,which is another format rule i often overlookd. in this third paper, those issues were corrected. and I received one of the highest scores out of all my three essays.      Next ,let me show you my ...

       My paper 2 is about the facts and myths about job competiton about immigrants. In paper two I learned how to develop a strong and debatable argument. how to creat an effective introducion by using strategies such as telling a story,including statistics,or using a quote to make the opening more engaging.I practice how to write a clear thesis statments and suporting sentences,and how to creat effective evidence to support the topic sentense. I alo learned how to write a strong conclusion ,such as by overview the main idea, giving a future thought ,calling to a action,asking a question,using a quotation. Jiawei Han Professor Esther Lee AMLA 80 Spring 22 March 2025 Myths And Facts About Job Competition About Immigrants In California，more than half of all farmworkers are immigrants, according to the American Farm Bureau. Immigrants play an essential role in supporting the farm industries. Without these immigrant workers, millions of dollars’ worth of crops would sp...

     My Paper 1 had a very rough beginning. I didn’t even know what the MLA format was, and I made a lot of mistakes in my first draft. Ms. Lee gave me very detailed feedback, which helped me understand much more clearly what I needed to correct.      this is my firs draft of paper 1: Hope and Reality- American Dream in my heart Opportunity and Success wealth and freedom Challenges, Sacrifices, and Hardships Striving for a Better Future The American Dream for different people has different definitions. To me it is a new beginning and makes my life richer and has a lot of different experiences. but in the distance between us , Mami said: "In the United States, we will have everything we ever dreamed of," "We won’t be poor anymore.",American dreams mean opportunity and wealth, and a place without poverty and hardship. To someone it is freedom and can be themselves. So many different definitions about American dreams ,any way, American dream is a kind of good ...

          The story of Reyna tells me some truths about growth.      First, you must keep growth, don't give up on yourself, no matter how terrible situation your are experiencing is , all the suffering and hard time will be a gift of your life. making you are stronger,more powerful and motivative to get success. Reyna is as a girl experiencing a lot of bad things, the family separation, the extreme poverty, the  sneaking  across the border of Mexico, all these bad things shape her as a sensitive and more emotional person, it is also a gift for her.       Second, one's success is not only determined by her growth environment, how you treat the difficulty and how you look at yourself is also the key point of the success. Rayna's father didn't agree she go to study in university, she didn't give up and she continued her studies in community college, and she transferred to the 4-years university eventually.  ...