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       My paper 2 is about the facts and myths about job competiton about immigrants. In paper two I learned how to develop a strong and debatable argument. how to creat an effective introducion by using strategies such as telling a story,including statistics,or using a quote to make the opening more engaging.I practice how to write a clear thesis statments and suporting sentences,and how to creat effective evidence to support the topic sentense. I alo learned how to write a strong conclusion ,such as by overview the main idea, giving a future thought ,calling to a action,asking a question,using a quotation. Jiawei Han Professor Esther Lee AMLA 80 Spring 22 March 2025 Myths And Facts About Job Competition About Immigrants In California，more than half of all farmworkers are immigrants, according to the American Farm Bureau. Immigrants play an essential role in supporting the farm industries. Without these immigrant workers, millions of dollars’ worth of crops would sp...

     My Paper 1 had a very rough beginning. I didn’t even know what the MLA format was, and I made a lot of mistakes in my first draft. Ms. Lee gave me very detailed feedback, which helped me understand much more clearly what I needed to correct.      this is my firs draft of paper 1: Hope and Reality- American Dream in my heart Opportunity and Success wealth and freedom Challenges, Sacrifices, and Hardships Striving for a Better Future The American Dream for different people has different definitions. To me it is a new beginning and makes my life richer and has a lot of different experiences. but in the distance between us , Mami said: "In the United States, we will have everything we ever dreamed of," "We won’t be poor anymore.",American dreams mean opportunity and wealth, and a place without poverty and hardship. To someone it is freedom and can be themselves. So many different definitions about American dreams ,any way, American dream is a kind of good ...

          The story of Reyna tells me some truths about growth.      First, you must keep growth, don't give up on yourself, no matter how terrible situation your are experiencing is , all the suffering and hard time will be a gift of your life. making you are stronger,more powerful and motivative to get success. Reyna is as a girl experiencing a lot of bad things, the family separation, the extreme poverty, the  sneaking  across the border of Mexico, all these bad things shape her as a sensitive and more emotional person, it is also a gift for her.       Second, one's success is not only determined by her growth environment, how you treat the difficulty and how you look at yourself is also the key point of the success. Rayna's father didn't agree she go to study in university, she didn't give up and she continued her studies in community college, and she transferred to the 4-years university eventually.  ...

   Actually ,this is my first English novel. I am very grateful to Professor Lee for giving this reading task to me . At first, I felt pressured and doubted I could not  finish it at all.However, as I gradually immersed the story ,I found I was completely captivated by it, Without realizing it, my English reading skills improved along the way. At the beginning, I had to constantly look up words, but later I was able to guess meanings and read smoothly from start to finish. I realized that reading is such a wonderful way to learn.    The author, RENA, uses very emontional and detailed writing to describe her childhood experiences including family separation, poverty, despair, and the lack of love. She also tells the story of immigrating to the United States, what a ruough time of crosing the brodor,and her relationships with her parents and siblings. what she had experienced make me so sorry and made me tear up several times, but Rena didn't give up pursuing educ...

why do you think humman rights is immportant to immigrants?     human rights are very important for all immigrants, many immigrants come from a country due to a lack of basic human right, they move to seek a more secure and free place to settle in , human right is kind of protection  from unfair treatment, politics ,movement, and discrimination, these rights can promises them live a better environment, they feel safe and also help immigrants integrate more smoothly into their new communities .    make the assemble to the new country and engage themself to this country .if the society didn't agree on these human right, the society will mess up ,and in bad organization, if immigrants feel they are not protected properly here ,they will not live here for long ,maybe go back their home country and will not put all their wealth here. in order to uphold these right ,every one has the responsibility, we should act the right from ourself ,to learn ,to act ,to let ...

  How can we fix these sentence? identify whether each is a Comma Splice (CS), Run-on (RO), or correct (C). In today's class ,Ms. Loisa  give us a wonderful lesson on how to fix the sentences. CS,RO,and C,I  learned a lot and did some exercese, I realize this is a small part I never paid attention to before, but it is so immportant in English  . It really helped me  more clearly understand the using of comma,actually ,even a small punctuation mistakes can change the meaning or clarity of a sentence. For example, I used to put together two independent clauses with a comma, I don't konw that it’s a comma splice. Now, I know that I should use a period, a semicolon, or a coordinating conjunction like “and” or “but.” I also practiced identifying run-on sentences, which are long and confusing because they aren’t separated properly. These grammar points may seem minor, but they are very important for writing clearly. I will keep practicing so I can improve my...

    When my daugher is a little girl ,her faverrate food is  steamed egg custard cooked by her grandma, but after we came to the US, she can't enjoy the deliciouse food any more ,for her gandma can't come here with us ,so as a silly mum I had tred my best to cook it as deliciouse as my mum did ,but it seems easy but I failed many times.fianally I got the secret of it ,and my daughter is very happy.    I also think steamed egg custard is  a nutritious and simple dish! Once you master the technique, it becomes very easy to make—perfect for busy workers and students to cook. andI can't wait to share it with you!     first ,it needs prepare the ingredients: two eggs, lukewarm water (about 50 degrees Celsius), salt, ground pork, chopped green onions, and three shrimp.     Next, thoroughly mix the eggs and water. Note: The ratio of water to eggs should be approximately 1:2 or between 1:2 and 1:2.5. The water must be lukewarm. I...